Planning: Magazine and Digipak Feedback

Feedback from both the hand drawn designs and designs with images from the internet:

Date	Name	Magazine Feedback	Rate /10	Digipak Feedback	Rate /10	Improvements
11/09/17	Louise	- Kept with a common theme - One main image to pull focus	7	-I like the idea of the other songs being listed on the back, this allows it to feel more like a CD cover	8	-Overall both designs seemed to be very brief.
11/09/17	Phil	- Good colour theme - Links the music video and the magazine	7	-The digipak is the type of thing that your target audience would appeal to, as it is a modern twist of the cover.	7	-More detail might be needed on the final product
11/09/17	Libby	- Ideas look like a magazine that has already been created	8	-Colours would easily stand out on the shelf. -The images  are simple, but the type of thing that is likely to be seen on a digipak	7	-Make sure that the lyrics on the front of the digipak don’t take away from the images
12/09/17	Katie	-I love the idea that the same location is being used on the magazine cover	8	-The digipak looks aesthetically pleasing, with the colours that are being used	7	-Make sure that the colours match, instead of using a bunch of random ones
12/09/17	Emilia	-The magazine cover has good ideas for the photography -The font is going to look good, due to the colours that are being used	7	-The digipak has a good layout, that allows the information to easily be seen to the person purchasing the CD	8	-Make sure that their not over crowded, but includes the necessary information.
12/09/17	Ashley	-Photography is going to stand out on the magazine as it is the biggest thing that is being added to the magazine. This will look good as it is going to bring the colour and detail to the advert.	6	-I like the digipak ideas, however it is not the type of thing that I enjoy on a digipak. In addition to this, the ideas that have been included are the typical things that are seen on a digipak.	7	-It is quite simple, I would like to see more on the advert
12/09/17	Tia	-Keeps up with a common theme	8	-The digipak design has a good layout to it	7	-Don’t over complicate it, as other magazine adverts that have been created are also very simple

After creating a magazine and digipak design, I decided to gather feedback from people to see what ideas I need to improve on and other ideas that I should make sure get included in the first draft of each one. Looking closely into the information that I have gathered, I can see the improvements are all similar to one another. The improvements that have been suggested is the idea to make sure that they are not over crowded, but have the relevant information on, to ensure that they still fit with the typical conventions of the different text styles.